Once there was a dinosaur called Danny. He has green scaly skin and really sharp claws. He runs as fast as a cheetah and he eats 6000 cows a day. He has 2 big horns on his head. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth.He has 2 big horns on his head with spikes running down his back. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth. He's tall, he's humongous, he's a giant and he’s my friend. He's very nice and caring but he looks scary. When ever people are hurt Danny carries them to safety. He is a hero.
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Friday, April 17, 2020
My Friend Danny the Dragon
WALT: Use create a descriptive piece of writing to tell the reader what my dinosaur looks like.
Once there was a dinosaur called Danny. He has green scaly skin and really sharp claws. He runs as fast as a cheetah and he eats 6000 cows a day. He has 2 big horns on his head. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth.He has 2 big horns on his head with spikes running down his back. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth. He's tall, he's humongous, he's a giant and he’s my friend. He's very nice and caring but he looks scary. When ever people are hurt Danny carries them to safety. He is a hero.
Once there was a dinosaur called Danny. He has green scaly skin and really sharp claws. He runs as fast as a cheetah and he eats 6000 cows a day. He has 2 big horns on his head. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth.He has 2 big horns on his head with spikes running down his back. He has a tail 20 metres long. He has 2 scary eyes and he has an enormous mouth with 20 sharp teeth. He's tall, he's humongous, he's a giant and he’s my friend. He's very nice and caring but he looks scary. When ever people are hurt Danny carries them to safety. He is a hero.
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