WALT: we are learning to add
descriptive detail to our writing
descriptive detail to our writing
Once there was seven brothers
training to turn into anything then
they went hunting at kaimaumau
and they heard beautiful Singing.
They saw 6 beautiful Wahine up
on the hill
on the hill
Singing and brushing their hair and
the
brothers made the wahine their
wifes.and the wife's planned to
Starve the brothers to death but 1
of the brothers went and listened
to the wife's plan then went back to
the village to tell the brothers.
They made a net to capture the
wife's and 1 of them turned into a
hawk and took them to the god of
Night and gave them a chance to
shine in the sky every winter.
nice start kade i liked your writing you said wahine instead of girls
ReplyDeletethank you
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